by Algren1
But you need to learn what apostrophes are for, as well as the difference between lay and lie.
Liked the story but I think you are using the word "whilst" a little too often.
Thanks for the feedback guys. I've tried to resubmit the sotry after making some tweaks but can't seem to figure it out.
Cheers
I've been trying to get my cousin in bed with her big tits but just hasn't happened yet.
I was laughing so hard because i actually thought you were gonna get caught. Darn
so disappointed when he just went back to his room.