by miserybusiness
Thank you for adding a sequel to this! I loved it! Hope you write more soon, you're an awesome writer!
loved that you added more of this story! hope to read more of your stories soon:)
That was surprisingly awesome. It reminded me of my relationship with my homeboy. Great story!!
100!!! Thank you for starting my week out with a BANG! Your work is wonderful. Thanks again.
really nice love story. you are a good writer, keep it up.
I LUVD IT!!! T_T but u forgot the kiiiiids! *cries* COME OOON PROLONG THE STORY!!! ;[ i want more more.... =.=
I loved this story. I read the first part and was so happy reading this to find out they stay together. The ending put tears in my eyes.
thanks for all the comments. i love that you guys love my work! this is great practice for me :)
Loves the way you write. Don't suppose you live anywhere near Detroit, do you? Naaaa.... I could never get THAT lucky. Any chance there'll be more to the story?
I met a young lady, not so much like the one in your story, but one that had more feminant qualities than any white girl I had ever met. However we never had the opertunity to get to know each other, this was in the late fifties and an interacial relationship was next to impossible, but I have thought about her many times over the years. Your story was a great read, and brought back some very nice memories. Thank you for a nice trip through some fine warm feelings of the past.
I love this story! I can relate to the first chapter more than I can relate to this one, seeing as I'm an 18 year old senior in high school & live in the south suburbs of Chicago. I wish I were Jayda so badly, that I almost envy her. This is a great story that I could easily see myself in. This will forever be one of my favorite stories. Good Work!!!