by Writeman
Realy good job here. Erotic and sexy story. thanks for your work.
Loved it, so sweet and gentle, hope you write the next chapter soon.
The ending was eh! It could have been soooooo much better with another paragraph or two!
What a hot woman! I love that she had full pubic hair. To the young man who was exploring her for his first time it was a wonderful experience. The first woman I ever had sex with was a preacher's wife. She was very much like this. When she orgasmed her body shook violently. I had her numerous times. It was always wet and wonderful.
A perfectly paced story of a tender slowly growing love affair.
I even fell in love with Carol myself.
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This was a beautifully sweet and sensitive "love story", unencumbered by the usual pressures toward more base urges. Thank you for writing in this manner, for behaving like a grown-up, and for treating Carol with such tenderness and respect.
You had the perfect woman. I hoped to read about your intimacy but you held off. I assume you did not want to be vulgar in describing what would have been reproductive sex. As you wrote about having your hands in her panties, I assumed you were going to tell us about other escapades. It was a great read. One can only guess if it was based on real life or just a dream.