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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Very well written, I was on the edge of my seat feeling the sexual tension of the characters. It was an unusual scenario, but could happen especially in today's coed dorms. I also felt the grammar was excellent. Good job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
i see the makung of a threesome

interesting story Barb Abby and Wes.

Maybe add Carla. Roomate stud :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

I agree with most of Lisa's comments with two minor caveats: Discrete is not the same as discreet, and it's the latter that you want for this story. Second, because stokes is spelled correctly, it was passed over when it should have been strokes. Overall, the writing was much better than that in most stories. Carry on, please.

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Grew up in southern Oklahoma and went to college for civil engineering in upstate New York where I have lived ever since. Had a successful career, but some years ago in my mid-life crisis I quit my job, went back to school for a doctorate and became a college professor. It's...

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