All Comments on 'My College Housing Mistake'

Very hot. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Very promising. Looking forward to the next part!

Definitely keep this going. 5 star start!

Reads like it was written by an incel.

an okay start of something that could be good as long as Sam also has a protector as well as a blackmailer. I can already tell that I don't like your Henry character and as long as he is in lead position you will never get more than 2 or three stars from me. Pappasleaze!

Ok. Good start. Now keep going.

Be careful about too much danger - it is already a real fear for many of your readers. Let Sam feel safe while also degraded/humiliated/forced.

I agree with the others. Make it mor about her arousal at the humiliation rather than the fear. I can’t wait to read about her descent into humiliation and degradation

Love this please write more