All Comments on 'My Compass'

I enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for sharing.

but they do point in the right direction. TK U MLJ LV NV

I have no idea what the point of this story was, but it's nicely written and left a smile on my face.

:)

I always like the good short stories. It does take more time to compile one, much more thought than stringing out a long descriptive story.

I would like to see more solid short stories. This is a good one. I like the attempt at writing in a local dialect.

Much brighter and happier story than previous work. Keep it up, D.

drmac100

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Much better.

Enjoyed this. Not nearly as intense as your other work (without taking away any from either). Just a nice read with a happy ending.

I LOVED the beginning! But the introduction of the female character moved way to quickly to sex. The sex was too quick, and all about the man. Slow that down a little. More foreplay, more mental arousal. (I am a lady, and liked the man's journey- I wanted to see him treat her like his queen in bed)

I'm going to read the rest of your stories.

I gave it a '5'. The story had a great idea, and the story line proceeded nicely. Then, you forgot to give the readers closure. She had no luggage, no transportation, and no wearing apparel. There was no indication she was not just passing through. Any comment they made could have said this time, it was different from all the other times that his chest had stopped hurting for a few days.

Other than that, it would have been a '6'. Congrats!