All Comments on 'My Cousin is Perfect'

by Domes88

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Loved it more please

DarkkBrothaOneDarkkBrothaOneabout 2 years ago

Not bad. If I have any gripe, it was a little quick for my tastes with little character development. But overall a good story for someone new to the genre to take in. 4 Stars.

csoshcsoshabout 2 years ago

I want to see where you take this story!

DanDraperDanDraperabout 2 years ago

Loved it. It was a lot of fun and very erotic too. I have to agree with a previous comment that it was a little too quick. I felt that Chloe got into the idea of being a cam-girl a little too quickly, she could've used a little more convincing. Other than that, this was a lot of fun to read and if there's another chapter in the works I'll be looking forward to it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Not bad, but a little rushed. If you do write more, it's going to be hard to expand your story line. You should have just written enough to get your main point of the porn site photos and took a few photos and perhaps a little playing around with the girls. That would have been enough for chapter 1 than you would have a lot more to write in coming stories. Just a thought

Crusader235Crusader235about 2 years ago

More please. Hot as fuck.

blueskyminingblueskymining6 months ago

Another Chapter please.

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A guy who has a beautiful family that provide the inspiration for his fantasies, and likes reading about those of others.