by Domes88
Not bad. If I have any gripe, it was a little quick for my tastes with little character development. But overall a good story for someone new to the genre to take in. 4 Stars.
Loved it. It was a lot of fun and very erotic too. I have to agree with a previous comment that it was a little too quick. I felt that Chloe got into the idea of being a cam-girl a little too quickly, she could've used a little more convincing. Other than that, this was a lot of fun to read and if there's another chapter in the works I'll be looking forward to it.
Not bad, but a little rushed. If you do write more, it's going to be hard to expand your story line. You should have just written enough to get your main point of the porn site photos and took a few photos and perhaps a little playing around with the girls. That would have been enough for chapter 1 than you would have a lot more to write in coming stories. Just a thought