All Comments on 'My Cousin Jo and I Pt. 11'

.. but, please check for spelling and grammatical errors.

I stop reading half way through Jo turn into a bitch not my cup of tea it the Series Has been good up till there

This is so HOT ...... what a great series you have going :) Thank you.

Please tell me that Jo is still under the influence of her period!?!?

Instead of repeatedly describing each chapter with "My cousin Jolene comes to stay for the summer", why not actually mention what occurs in each different chapter? If it's to indicate that the story is a chapter in a longer story, the fact that each chapter is NUMBERED already takes care of that concern. You could do it as simple as "My Cousin Jo & I, Pt 12" - "Jolene gets a haircut", "Pt 13" - "We discuss the pros and cons of hybrid automobiles", etc...

If you're still not sure what I'm talking about, look at pretty much THE OVERWHELMING MAJORITY of the other stories posted here.

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