All Comments on 'My Cousin Valerie Ch. 03'

Your writing had me rather breathless at your description of their intimate experiences.

As with my last comment regarding the previous chapter, I believe this is quite the developing story and LoveAE has done a superb job capturing the interest of the reader by building tension with subtle seduction. What I really admire about the story is that it does not just give away what the reader wants but makes the reader join these characters for the ride.

We are now coming into the relationship between Ethan and Val, and now that we've had a taste of the forbidden fruit it only makes us hunger for what is to come. Kudos to the author, you have a great talent and I urge you to continue to write!

Five Stars! Bravo!

CastawayCloud

Can't wait for Chapter 4, keep up the good work!

Thanks for everyone's comments, Chapter 4 has been written but I am still revising it to get it the way I want it. Please be patient!

pleas continue and maybe nock val up

This was definitely worth the buildup of the previous two chapters. Excellent work. Please continue. I hope Valerie is reluctant mainly because she is a virgin.

Awesome story, please continue love the story and characters, want to read what happens next

Id like to see this story continue, with the cousins being together and possible pregnancy for Val

I love this story and i cant wait till the next chapter. 5 stars

awesome story cant wait to see what happens next

love it

Please continue this amazing story.

Very interesting story would like to see where these cousins go. Keep the story coming. Thanks

Love the story! Please keep writing.

Please keep writing this story. It is one of the better stories on this site.

LOVE this story & can't wait for additional chapters. Gotta say tho that I have this sneakin' feeling that Val is STILL a virgin.....just kinda got that impression from all the BRAGGIN' she's done over the years & the fact that she's had a new BF every other week....

PLEASE continue this ASAP!!!!!

Please continue. I have to know what happens with these two.

Keep going.

I definitely can't wait for the next chapter! This was the best one yet

You made us wait for this latest installment. But it was worth the wait! I like how they haven't just dropped to the floor and went at it. Ethan is still arguing with himself over what he wants to do with her. And with Valerie. I LOVE small breasts! I will be looking for the next one!