All Comments on 'My Cousin Vera'

this was so rushed and sloppy i can see why you got no comments so far. this reads like a story out line not a postable story, time to delete and rewrite it PROPERLY and use a good editor before reposting. as is this was a waste of your time and ours.

A very disappointing weak storyline and sad outcome. Needs recasting in more optimistic mood, with more satisfying plot, more convincing detail and much happier ending.