All Comments on 'My Cousin's a What?'

Finish the story - gave it a 4 instead of a 5 because you abandoned us.

Great story! I'd love to read more of Sara and Tom's escapades.

Meh, one of those "emancipated women" that has nothing to be ashamed yet she's all secretive about what she does and goes on the defensive instantly when she gets find out.

Absolutely loved it! But totally agreed another story with tommy following her out to california and setting up together. May e he makes an appearance in a film with her sharing mutual kink!

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Agree with Finish The Story. It needed an ending, hopefully she loves him and quits porn to be with him.....she was way too slutty for me.

A little to much build up, but I liked this one well enough to give it 4 stars. For me I would like to have had less of the rehashing of the younger life stuff between the cousins. I hope you add on to this story after they both start the new life out in Ca. A reader in Florida

Being a pervert myself, I would love to see the story of Sara and Tom continue, with Tom going to work for the porn company both in the office and in front of the camera. Then if his sister Taylor gets into modeling posing for Playboy in a college edition, then becoming a Playboy Playmate herself before turning to work in pornography at the same company her brother and Cousin Sara works at, maybe with other siblings and cousins joining them in California.

Generally a good cross between romance and lust. Would be fine to leave it here rather than "world building" for some sort of shared future. Elephant in the room is that it takes a very special/ unusual partner to maintain a relationship with someone who does porn.

Couple of small editing errors that don't warrant more mention than that.

Only nit to pick is that I come from a LARGE family and neither I nor any of my multitudinous cousins refer to one of the parents of someone that is part of the conversation as anything besides my/your Mom/Dad. I found the 'Aunt Evy' references confusing at first, as though there were a third Aunt who didn't have a speaking part.

You keep writing and I'll keep reading,

Thanks

To EZ8lt:

I don't think you read the same story I did.

Ummm - checking your story list, it appears as if the stories you plug at the end are yet to be written?

I'll watch for them

Thanks to all for your kind words and constructive criticism. If you enjoyed this story, the other books in this series can be purchased on my website, www.alanchurch.com, as the "Forbidden Secrets" anthology.

I so want more, great writing.

1st off...a South Park reference: "You go to hell. You go to hell and you die!"

Then we get an a flippin' an At Last the 1948 Show!/Monty Python reference:

"Do you think you could find someplace a little more comfortable before next Christmas? Like a pile of broken glass? Or maybe an old septic tank?"

"Luxury," Sara muttered, as she poured hot water into a mug. "When I was your age, I used to sleep on a pile of rusty nails in the middle of a swamp "

The only thing you didn't add was: "And we enjoyed it".

Just a brill move in a great story.

Sweet! Your characters are so damn genuine, meaning Truly Themselves, it's almost criminal! But they resonate so clear and true to my experience, it's undeniable.

Many times I will invest my time in reading a story in the forlorn hope that an author will "fulfill the promise of his premise," only to fall off the wagon when he takes a turn too fast in the plotline.

But you, sir, are a master craftsman of this genre, never guessing but always KNOWING exactly what fits perfectly. You better believe I am going to read the other titles, because I know that you will treat the characters (and me) like decent people who are worthy of respect! And entertain me deliciously in return for the investment.

Great story and artwork

I forgot to mention the Neil Gaiman ref with Blueberry Girl!

11/10 Blueberries!!!!!

Aww man was that it? Great story overall although I wish I could get a little more from it. Like continue the story.

Hey I cant find the stories mentioned at the bottom of the story.

I absolutely loved this story, but it deserves a sequel. How about Tommy goes to Hollywood? Thank you!

I liked the story, well written and interesting.

Well done! Definitely needs a sequel. What happens when Tommy and Sara visit each other? How and when will Sara tell her family? What's the families reaction? Will Sara share Tommy? Etc. Lots of possibilities.

Mfj

Will you do a sequel to this?? I love how well written this waa

Your characters are great—Make a sequel.

Sara is a whore not a housewife like all pornstars and camgirls, I hate to say it but their not built to be wives but side bitches at best. Great story but Tommy is better off without her.

Please continue