All Comments on 'My Curvy Lover'

I really appreciate the emotional element to their relationship. It's a different kind of intimacy that many other stories neglect. Thank you and hope for a continuation!

That was a wonderful story. I love that you explained their connection from an early age and not jump right to the sex. These are my favorite scenarios in a story.

Yes, continue! You are writing a I love story.

Get the PAWG pregnant. Then her tits and belly will swell up really nice. Nothing on earth beats knocking up a close relation. I have done it to four.

The story that built up to their connection was very romantic and erotic.

please continue to show how their relationship continues.

You don't know whether or not to continue your own story? If that's the case, don't bother.

Thank you all for the positive comments,

I really appreciate anyone that spends their time reading my writing and takes something away from my words and ideas regardless of the extent of enjoyment It is all appreciated equally.

I spent a long time on this character development and I apologize if the question mark at the end came off to some as presumptuous as it was only meant as a dramatic effect.

If anyone cares chapter 2 is complete and being edited right now, and I have an outline of where the characters go in chapter 3 as they progress in life.

Again I thank everyone for your interest, and I am humbled that you are reading my writing and I will continue to use all feedback as a positive direction.

Thanks,

Please continue. This was very good!

You write very well, and have decent character development. This along with good writing skills shows you care about your readers and take pride in things you do. Please Keep writing, and above all finish the story which you have set up so well. I'll be watching for it! Thank you for posting.

What a great story. Hope to read another chapter really soon.

And you're a dumbass prick

Please continue...loved it!

Please do continue

Another good story

Please continue.