All Comments on 'My Daddy, My Pimp Ch. 01: Introductions'

by MsBadChoicesMade

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jamesn100jamesn100almost 8 years ago

Enjoying it a great deal, just ended a bit suddenly. I want more!

MsBadChoicesMadeMsBadChoicesMadealmost 8 years agoAuthor

Thanks for your feedback. Glad you enjoyed the story. I promise there will be more!

yaoiloveryoungbloodyaoiloveryoungbloodalmost 8 years ago

Saw this on the forum. Nice story and definitely something to develope. Id say continue this. Not my thing but very well written and pretty sexy for some ;) the cliffhanger is over used, but used very well in this story. 4/5

Kessler218Kessler218almost 8 years ago
Decent

I liked this story. It was very well written. If would have been better if it were longer though. It felt like it was just getting started and then it was over. Also, and I hope you have already thought of this, I want to see the father fuck his daughter before it is over. If he is going to pimp her out, he should get to sample the goods.

BobbyRogersBobbyRogersalmost 8 years ago

so filthy and hot, i came... can't wait for the next one

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Great story

Great story and extremely hot.

Would like to hear more.

Also the story would do better being a bit longer. It was great but then seemed to end very abruptly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Waiting on part 2

Eagerly awaiting the next part of the story

ForsakenliteroticaForsakenliteroticaover 7 years ago
That was great

I really enjoyed your story, very powerful

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
More

Pls continue great story so far can't wait to hear more of Helen getting used like a dirty whore

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Excellent story and writing. Can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

More! My pussy is so wet.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Shame

It really is such a shame this has never been continued. Daddy needs to pimp her tiny asshole to more men and humiliate her exposed body.

AdenzenoAdenzenoalmost 3 years ago

Please write more!

ngsluttyngsluttyover 1 year ago

Loved it!! Wished it was my family doing that with me!! Sad there isn't more!

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