All Comments on 'My Dad's Friend Takes My Virginity'

by magentalotus

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Loved it!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Loved it, too.

Very well done for a first story here. The characters were very enjoyable and their intimacy was palpable. The feeling these 2 have for each other should be explored more in future chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Break her in right

Gemma has one more hole to open up. There is no way Jason should pass on breaking Gemma in right and being the first one in her virgin butt. She needs to learn that she can get her nut with a cock in her tight little asshole also.

magentalotusmagentalotusover 3 years agoAuthor

Thank you for reading and for the kind and thoughtful words! This story has been republished (unedited) as Gemma's Sexual Awakening Ch. 1 to better organize and continue Gemma's story with Jason and other sexy trysts. Thank for reading and I hope you enjoy the next chapters as Gemma's tale unfolds.

akindman22015akindman22015over 3 years ago
Exceptionally Well Done

Loved your story. The pace was excellent and told with love and enjoyment. Thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

So nice im Lucy and i have sex with my Dads friend i wasnt a virgin as id slept with guys before him but had a crush on him for as long as i remember. I wanted sex with him probably since i was about 14 but it didnt happen i tried believe me but he wouldnt. I was sixteen and decided i have to do something so hatched a plan to let him catch me naked to see what would happen. I knew that when they were drinking to use the toilet you have to walk past my room so my plan was simple when he walked past i would get naked and leave the door open just enough to see me and figure it out and see what happens. Fast forward one night they were drinking so i said i was going to bed and said goodnight and went to my room and waited. First few times was Dad going to the toilet as he only drinks beer so i stayed dressed. Finally i heard Sam going so when i heard him go in and lock the door i quickly got undressed and waited nervous wasnt the word for it. I open the door almost half way and positioned myself as if i was fixing my bed so he would see me moving and that would catch his attention. I heard the toilet flush and the door open and him walking out i was shaking and felt myself wet as he came close i shook the duvet and lifted my pillow and heard his footsteps stop. I bent over and put my pillow in its place a knee on the bed and a leg on the floor knowing i was showing myself to him. I got up turned around and he was standing staring with his mouth open getting wider as he could now see my boobs and shaved slit were on view i smiled and said Hi do you like and walked towards him as he just stood there in shock i took his hand and put it on my boob and said i want you to fuck me. Shit was all he said still shocked so i took his other hand and put it between my legs on my slit. He moaned as i grabbed his hard cock and started unzipping him and took out his cock i was kinda surprised as it was thicker and longer than i imagined he would be but definatley bigger than anyone i already had sex with. I knelt down and started sucking him and i reckon in under two minutes he was shaking and cumming in my mouth and lots. When he was finished i stood up and said nice but i hope you last longer fucking me next time. He slid a finger in me and had me on my tiptoes as he kissed me and said he would love to fuck me but not here and not tonight. I said ok when he replied friday night say you are going out with friends and come to my place so i said ok. We have been fucking for almost a year now and the sex is amazing especially at night outdoors which i love doing. He is the first to fuck my ass and i like that more each time. I dont know how long it will last but im enjoying it now and intend to keep going for more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

So damn hot

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

this was good until you just had to have the second position be the typical, annoying and boring dog. Why? Had he been putting it in her end, that would have been fine. No riding or any other position. so you ruined it for me at the end. congrats on being so generic and boring.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

boring, typical garbage. be original. clearly written by male virgin who thinks generic is okay

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

"I'm over half your age" cracked me up. Do you have any idea what those words actually mean? Because I'm 100% sure they don't mean what you were hoping they would.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

where are these innocent young virgins, that somehow say shit like 'cum in my cunt' with their first ever sexual partner? Comically bad character design.

AnonymousAnonymous27 days ago

that damn doggy position ruined what was a hot story. thanks for that. Especially when ot was not needed

I dont get why everyone thinks everyone favors that boring posotion.

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New author of short stories on Lit. Not so new sexual explorer. My goal with my short stories is to provide detailed fantasy sexual trysts but not write novels that take forever to get to the action. I hope you enjoy!