All Comments on 'My Daughter in Law Pt. 03'

Great story so far but I believe that there is so much more to come from Rebecca, her father in law and Daniel to say the least !!!!!!

Obviously, you have started reading your work before pressing the 'publish' button. I didn't bother scoring the other two stories in this series as they were complete rubbish. This one at least gets a three (or an E) for effort.

FAN TASTIC story

Wish She was daughter in law

Hope you have another chapter ready for the next chapter

Near the beginning of the series, we are told that Rebecca is 23 years old.

I wondered how she had a daughter old enough to go to school. Well, it's not impossible.

But in this part, first we read that Jackson is old enough to be her son. Next, that he is 19 years old. Would she have given birth at age 4? And gotten pregnant at age 3?

(FYI, the youngest recorded mother in history was a 5 year old in South America in the 1930's. Look it up on the Internet. Well documented by the doctors and media.)

Paul in Oklahoma

What happen to Rebecca's daughter? Great story. Please write a part 8, 9 to finish the story.