All Comments on 'My Daughter, My Slave Ch. 01'

the perfect daddy....*s*

I love these stories all so much, all of your's, but the slave daughter ones the most. I wish I was your worthless, wet cunt of a daughter. I'd let you use me any way you wanted. I'm getting wetter just typing this. Keep up the good work, telling the sick, nasty hot stories.

Daddy,

Please write more! I am inside myself with pleasure

keep it up daddy, i wanna b fucked like that so badly. i had to touch myself while reading it

So fucking HOT!!!

You started your sentences way too many times with I. It was impossible to read this story. The start of the story felt static and didn't have any natural flow in it. You might want to get an editor to help you out.

So freaking hot. I wish my daddy would force me. Damn, that would feel so good.

what a shitty way of writing cut that shit out

So as I lie here rubbing my clit, breathing heavy at your exciting words a thought comes to me: last year I cheated on my husband, and we have moved past it. I know he still has some pent up anger though.. I want to read this story to him and have him start fucking and punishing me the same way. Of course, in my mind, it moves to anal abuse as well, which I'm sure I can look forward to in your next chapters. Amazing story, I can't wait to read on...