All Comments on 'My Daughter, the Gymnast'

best story i have ever read

This is the first time I cried over a story on literotica. Everything resonates in the right way.

This is a great story,it has some sad parts,but is what I think makes it a great story

My attention doesn't usually hold more than a couple of pages. You did very well keeping the story interesting and engaging the whole time Mr. Murray. Thank you for this story!

The first time I’ve ever shed a tear reading a story on this platform.

Brilliant.

This was excellent. Loved it.

I totally agree. This reads like a movie, I cried also

Amazing

Best story i've read in a long time. Keep writing and if you need ideas email me.

this is a love story, not even close to porn. beautiful, and tear jerking.

hoped on for a wank and the only thing that got choked up was me 10/10 my good sir

10

A beautiful story, thank you so much for sharing this with us to.

Wonderfully entertaining. Loved the story!!!

The best story ever on here. This is the first time I have ever cried reading something on Literotica !!! It broke my heart but I it was erotic at the same time!!! Absolutely amazing!!! ❤️

I don’t recall ever reading such a well written Love Story with a box of tissues!

Well done John

What a good story, keep up the good work.

This is a well thought out and very well written. Great story.

Perfect story

Great work well done

Wish I could give it more than five stars!

I have to say, reading erotica I never expected to be brought to actual tears. Being a widower myself with children there were too many similarities I couldn’t help but weep!

Well written! Bravo!

almost didn't need the D/d content and have it put in romance section. 5/5

Nato_

Excellent, bittersweet

back in Molly's arms again as it was so fitting

Beautiful story, I gave 4/5 because that's not how hymens work and it threw it for me a bit. Good talent.

This was actually well done. I kept tryna push myself to keep reading because the sex was so vivid I wanted to stop, but I did and it's actually a beautiful story.

Goddam truly well done!

i found this a bit hard in places to read only because i lost my wife to cancer just over 2 years ago. in some way i wish we had had daughter just like her but it was not to be.

Excellent story. Lots more feels than one expects from an erotic work. Choked me up a bit there at the end. Good work.

Loved the story. It was a story of an unconditional LOVE. I am new here did you write anymore stories.

great story, but seemed too quick to leave him for Luke

For Paul or rather Pauly Boy to have loved Molly so much and to lose her so soon was absolutely heartwrenching.This was a real tear-jerker and sad beyond belief.But the silver lining was the way MJ actually channeled her Mum Molly at times like Molly had come back from the grave to console Paul in his darkest time.

I knew MJ wasn't a replacement for Molly but mainly a remedy,Paul stayed for his kids for them to establish their own lives,and once that was accomplished Paul peacefully followed Molly in death.Yes this story was emotional and sad,but it also had the underlying prospect of love beyond the grave.That's why this gets 5 stars from me.

Dude... I'm not supposed to be fuckin' CRYING while reading adult stories...

From one fellow author on here to another, that's the highest praise and tribute I can give... to have made us feel as much or more with our hearts than we're feeling with our other parts.

Very well done, sir.