by dgowre
needs no continuation leave the possibilities in the imagination of the reader a classic well done
So very sexy without being overly graphic. This sort of erotica speaks to our largest sex organ, our brain.
Please write more!
So fucking hot, these two rampant cunts are fab, more and more please and soon. Later maybe the daughter gets turned and joins in. Must stop my panties are dripping, and cunny needs attention.
and should not write from a woman's point of view.
btw, a person cannot be "turned".
if you are not sure guys, ask yourself if the right guy could "turn" you.
Whilst it is true that much of the best Lesbian erotica is written by women, there are too many examples on this site of superb stories written by men. Check the lesbian sex Hall of Fame for some examples.
By the way - a good first story by dgowre - his favourites show that he has taste.
I found the story a bit formulaic.
You did a descant job for your fist lesbian story. A tiny bit cliche though.
would love to see if they bring Susie into there bedroom fun
This story was developed very, very well. I agree with the previous writer, would love to enjoy reading additional chapters and maybe bring the dauthter into the picture. That sure would be hot. Keep the story going, please.
May have been a different scenario, but I have lived this experience! Thank you for bringing back a plethora of very happy memories! I loved it.
This was such a simple tale, told well. The sex was delightful in its gentle passion. I liked the ending too; a knowing, liberal daughter rather than the usual angst ridden cliches of having to come out and all the trauma, blah, blah...Maybe the door is even open for a bit of a challenge to that 'not her form of love'...