All Comments on 'My Day as a Pool Boy'

Very hot! Five stars and a favorite point!

Really enjoyed this, I thought it could have been longer, with more about Emily and Dylan's relationship, but it was still good as it was.

A bit sad story, to short to really develop the characters and it was a bit weird how it all happened, but it’s your story and you can tell however you want and like

I love your stories. I wish you hadn't taken them down as I now want to read all you've ever done. But I'll wait patiently as they dribble back out. Thanks so much for your GREAT writing!!

So good that with Alex’s support the Dylan was able to help his Sister in the healing process following what her ex had put her through.. Hopefully today started that recovery process

Great story, a few typos though. Please continue posting your works.

I enjoyed this story in the first version, and itbit was just as good reading it for the second time.

I really enjoyed this story. I'd like a sequel to see where you go with it.

Very nice, 5/5! Thanks for this story!

Nicely written story, sometimes a little too blunt for me, butI really enjoyed it.

Great story. Please continue.

I enjoyed a lot reading it first time 5/5

He "loves" his young sister, but makes love to her and comes in her, without using a condom or clarifying if she is protected...

I enjoyed this story a lot, I hope you will continue to show how their relationship improves and their behaviour with others Emily's friends.

Excellently done. Would be nice to know if Emily was protected though. Good stopping point that also lends itself to continuing as well, which I think would be good. Alex and Dylan staying together, Emily getting back into guys, but finding that no one she gets with compares to what she has with Dylan, and the the of them end up together again as Dylan and Alex get married l could make for a great three-way love story.

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A wonderfully sweet and loving story. I think Alex would make an incredible girlfriend with the way she cares for and looks after Em.

MORE!

Oh yes, so very hot. More please. this could be lots of sexy fun

Very sweet , threesome partners in the making ❤️

A wonderful story without the usual drama of sister fucking brother. They just had sex. No big deal that they were siblings. I really liked this approach to incest. 5 stars!🌟

Bill S.

Very good story. I would like to see a continuation of this story.

Great story kept it interesting

Stopped reading at "small ass".