All Comments on 'My Deepest Desire'

And don't bring anyone else into it.

I would like to read a follow up ...then decide LOL

I think she should reveal that she knows it was your stories all along. She didn't know how to bring up renewing sex so she invented Linney on literotica and hoped for the best.

would be better if she knows.

Awesome responses folks, thank you. I appreciate your ideas and input.

Jay

Keep it just for yourself by now... ;)

Husband needs to keep his knowledge regarding the wife's syber chatting on the web site.

Via his user name on the web site he can suggest things to do sexually with her husband.

Also via the web the husband can inquire if the wife has ever been intimate with another man. On the 7 year sex free holiday in the marriage !

to himself till the time is right.

keep up the online dialogue; as she tells him about the reawakening sex life with her husband, push your desires further; to fuck that ass you just used the jelly on; to have her return the favor on your ass, starting slowly with tongue and fingers, to bullet vibes,and building to prostate massage and strap-on; ending with a double dildo, capped by a Realdoe/Feeldoe with vibe function, where BOTH get fully stimulated to explosion. Truly loving, sensual marital open-ness just does not get enough play in erotica, and should! eventually she should reveal that she has figured it out, and she then brings in even more open sharing; her lonely widowed best friend, he rold college roomie/sometime lover, all the while keeping it clear that YOU are the long term keeper

Please continue the story. In my opinion, Linney already knows. I'd like to see her use the situation to manipulate him for a while.

Dear Anonymous, I'm sure I can learn how to write from you- please feel free to reveal yourself and share some of your writing with me so that i can learn. I'm always willing to learn.

Jay

You're wrong. We - the Anonymous - will NEVER teach you how to write. If we could, you'd be attending classes with the rest of us. What we will teach you is how to whine, bitch, moan and complain about the writings of others. (Some appropriate cliche here about - doers doing and the rest teaching - seems like a nice touch). We will point out your terrible grammar. We will tell you how the story SHOULD have gone. We will tell you that it's in the wrong category. We will tell you that your story wasn't original, clever, interesting or entertaining in any fashion. What we will NEVER tell you is how to write.......PS - I didn't like this story much. For all the above mentioned reasons.

Don't tell her.

I'd wait a week or two, then tell her who you were writing as. Then see if her eyes light up in recognition. Great story! Loved it! 5 stars☆☆☆☆☆!