All Comments on 'My Delayed Train!'

by Witton1967

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mrsreadermrsreaderover 5 years ago
well told

Good and well told story

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
MORE

That left me excited and wanting more. Very good. I’m hanging here feeling like I want my turn.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Nice beginning

Definite want to read more. (And the bit about the older sister? I can identify with that too!)

victorianstiffvictorianstiffover 3 years ago
Nicely done...

Very nicely written except for the ending. It would have been great for the kid to have had cum also.

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