by regularguy13
“Sick bastard” that he is, he should have impregnated both of the twins too.
Cinco Estrellas! I really liked your story, but I do wish you would go over Page 4 and see if you really should have used the word "Exhilarating", which means causing strong feelings of excitement and joy; thrilling and life-affirming. Please consider that constructive. I DO LIKE YOUR WORK!
This had no flow, it was as if someone was just repeating words rather than a story.