All Comments on 'My Depraved Summer'

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collin4xxxcollin4xxxover 1 year ago

“Sick bastard” that he is, he should have impregnated both of the twins too.

juanviejojuanviejoover 1 year ago

Cinco Estrellas! I really liked your story, but I do wish you would go over Page 4 and see if you really should have used the word "Exhilarating", which means causing strong feelings of excitement and joy; thrilling and life-affirming. Please consider that constructive. I DO LIKE YOUR WORK!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

More!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I loved it!!! Left me wet and wanting more 😜

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loved it, URGENTLY IT'S NEEDED TO BE CONTINUED PLEASE

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This had no flow, it was as if someone was just repeating words rather than a story.

rbloch66rbloch667 months ago

Pretty much anything with twins is hot!

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