All Comments on 'My Descent with Sarah Pt. 01'

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PandelusionPandelusionalmost 2 years ago

Very good character build up. Can't wait to see what happens in coming chapters. Keep it up :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Sarah is what we call in the States, a sure thing. Nicely written. Fine work, mate.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great start. Might be a “sure thing” in the US, we have those too (aka “easy”) a good example being the two women with his Neanderthal friend Nick. Here in the UK the barmaid Sarah is a woman who knows what she wants.

Some people loose inhibitions with drink and others don’t have inhibitions at all.

Tess (UK)

jennyphiljennyphil5 months ago

Brilliant! Just found this series...

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