by Infernalcock
Very good character build up. Can't wait to see what happens in coming chapters. Keep it up :)
Sarah is what we call in the States, a sure thing. Nicely written. Fine work, mate.
Great start. Might be a “sure thing” in the US, we have those too (aka “easy”) a good example being the two women with his Neanderthal friend Nick. Here in the UK the barmaid Sarah is a woman who knows what she wants.
Some people loose inhibitions with drink and others don’t have inhibitions at all.
Tess (UK)