All Comments on 'My Dream Fuck'

How did this crap slip through Literotica's editing section?

Please don't bother writing anymore!

This is my first time posting a comment... and god almighty, it's one of the worst that I've read in Literoca.

If anyone of you are the types that reads the comments before reading the actually story - Just click "Back"

OK, but could use improvement on the writing styles, otherwise good subject. Grow on that.

This story just doesn't get anything correct. No manager or boss would do a teen in the men's restaurant where he might be discovered. Not even a good story.

Mmh I feel like this is a good skeleton of a story. Your beginning wasn’t terrible but your ending needed way more flesh to it. It felt very rushed and robotic and didn’t make me feel a sense of great pleasure. I think with more practice you could be great. Again it’s a good skeleton of a story just add more story and detail and take it slower. No need to rush.

She's supposedly a virgin, but talks and acts like the recruiter for a pimp? Totally unbelievable personality for a supposed first timer.