All Comments on 'My Dreamy History Professor'

Please do continue the story!

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solid writing. I enjoyed the detail in each scene, and the pacing was good. It immediately drew me in. well done!

Ok! I'm happy you want to read more :) I'll be working on it when I have free time this weekend.

Thank you for stirring up fond memories of my own passionate crush on my high school English teacher.;) Nothing ever happened of course, except in my little virginal schoolgirl fantasies.

I enjoyed this, but you need to slow down or edit more carefully as there are many mistakes in punctuation and missing capitalization in dialogue.

Example:

"(capital W)hat?" I asked with a nervous chuckle.

"You heard me," he said, his tone patronizing(period) "(capital Y)ou're always watching me, and I can see it in your eyes that you want me."

" (capital D)on't fight me," he commanded.

There's a lot like that. I hope this helps!

@kinkboi ..... hehe <3

@scriptedlove thank u so much! I'm happy u enjoyed ❤

Thank u, anonymous. I'm glad I'm not the only one with this fantasy:,) nothing will ever come of my crush on my professor either, but a girl can dream lol. And you're right,I was in a bit of a rush to upload it because I was excited abt getting it published! I'll edit it more carefully for the next chapter

A great first story! Solid writing and characterization. Hope you will continue, either with this or more story ideas to be developed!

Also, for final editing, I first check it with MS Word. Then I run it through Grammarly. You'll be amazed how many items it can find.

@ambersolis thank you so much!! ❤ I actually wrote it on my cellphone so that's probably why there are so many typos. I'll use my laptop and try MS word next time. And I plan to write chapter two this week :))) thanks for the support!

nice story

I enjoyed this quite a lot, thank you princess.

I can’t help but wonder if you have ever done any babysitting? The age gap would be just about perfect for a vignette from you.

Or maybe a slightly older guy, hanging out on a beach somewhere? 😈

I’ll keep an eye out for the next instalment.

This is phenomenal writing! I've fantasized about doing this with a student or two. Only in my dreams unfortunately...