All Comments on 'My Education Ch. 03'

Very Talented writer, Fantastic story that captured my interest from the start. I truely hope there is more to come,

What a wonderful series and so much more could be said. A certain 'emptiness' resulted with the end!

Expectations are mounting, I am certain - so, 'More, please.'

Your a Talented, Gifted, Writer. A truly heart warming, romantic tale of love, with a bit of sex lol. Love your writing, it flows with easy grace and meter that combined with mood, entices readers into the plot, and holds them there. Loved these stories, your one of my favorite writers. Thank you very much.

At the start of Ch. 02 the opening statement read:

"My thanks to everyone who left comments and wrote emails. My apologies for this next chapter taking as long as it did. The bulk of it was spent figuring out where I wanted the characters to go, and that took quite a bit of time. I hope everyone will find it to be as fun of a ride as I do. Finally, there will not be a two-month waiting time between the chapters that follow. Nick."

and yet

My Education Ch. 02 (4.86) 01/09/08

My Education Ch. 03 (4.85) 07/03/08

we are now at 7 years and counting without "the chapters that follow"

Does NT respond to email? Post on another site? Or did Nick succumb to Opus Dei?

hoping to hear ?

Really hope you come back to this some day. Great story.

that such a splendid work of art is orphaned...*sigh*

Very good but why didn't you finish it????

I really love this story! Ive gotta say though, its a hard read when you're tired! The sex scenes are long and I keep catching myself accidentally rereading the same bits!

Honestly, I couldn't do it if I was him, lol, nineteen or not, that is too damned much work for a good orgasm, I keep expecting someone to have a heart attack or wind up in the hospital with anemia! Rofl. A half hour of foreplay and an hourish of fucking and Im ready for a long-ass nap! Ah, to be in my early twenties again!

Great story that I would love to read more submissions of it.

You are a talented author and would like to read more of your work!!

Well written and totally engaging story

Very good reading, writing and plot. Personally, I would liked to have seen Sarah in a part of the ending as she has been so involved in Justin's life, but it is what it is. Cheers!

Just found your work. Really enjoying it, but definitely need more!!

Your bio page was last modified on March 22, 2013. Your last message said you missed a Thanksgiving deadline and figured it would take until February to finish it. Was that February 2013 or February 2014? Yet, here we are approaching Thanksgiving 2014 with still no Chapter 4. Are you still with us Nick? If so, when can we finally expect #4? At the very least, update your bio page again to let us know you're still alive and active in Lit. You have so many, many fans wishing to see how this wonderful story turns out.

One comment on the story thus far, I found it amusing that, in this story where two hearts find each other, Erin's initials are EKG, which is used to measure the rhythms of the heart. I'm assuming that was unintentional, but if it was on purpose, well done.

No WAY that's the end...?!?

I swear this is the hottest story I've read in some time...

Even the editing issues were unable to so more that hiccup the story, and none of those severe enough to keep the "Wow!" from proceeding ever onward.

But this story is as capable of extension as any story I've read and better than most.

Did I mention wow....????

But, though I'm not really a fan of asking for more when an author feels done, in this case I must. Sarah is still unfinished. Her remodel and feminin touch in the apartment needs to be told about. Her moving in and integration into Erin and Justin's lives has not really been addressed nor her love life. Is she too damaged, emotionally, for healthy relationships? Possibly, you might pair Sarah with Priya as she seems to need someone to help her to feel safe yet not dominate her and take away her hard won independence and jovial attitude. Though there are other characters that could come into play, Sarah is the biggest question mark. Justin and Erin's future seems to be set, but we (and Justin) still haven't met Erin's two daughters and need to see what their reaction is. However much they approve of Justine, they may be uncomfortable with Mom risking her career this way. Allison should make his acquaintance, intimately, also. Well, that's it. I love your story as is, but there are just some things I (and others obviously) would like to see wrapped up. Thumbs Up.

a very good story...

But i will LOVE to see Sarah involved as well...

Maybe in a permanent way...

Or lets say... She getting someone good for her... I mean.. She had all that sad history and it really should be happening that she gets some love.

But then again... Its my way of thinking many may not agree and its YOU who is telling the story... So keep up the good work :)

Great story.. I was completely absorbed into their world. My only hope was that Sarah would say "Kristine says to try the rhubarb"... More please....

I hoped, and hoped that somewhere close to the end that Erin would introduce her 59 year old widowed and horny Mother so that he could REALLY get an education!!!

Justin should finally meet Erin's daughters, but just meet, no sex.

This is a pretty good story, kinda repetitive in phrasing at times, but still good. Not really a fan of the sharing women idea and how easy it was for Justin to just jump on the idea of taking on another woman.

The sexual action and the characterization of the various people in the story are mostly well drawn, and the author definitely knows how to paint an evocative picture. His command of the language also makes the story flow well, without too many mechanical writing errors.

There are, however, a few things that bothered me about this submission and the "My Education" series as a whole: first, the way Justin transitions in a few weeks from a teenager who had never actually had intercourse in the first chapter (cheerleader tutorials in oral sex notwithstanding) to a Casanova who plays two experienced divorcees like Stradivarius violins. With perfect understanding of their turn-ons. At the same time. For hours and hours.

And the fact that everyone can essentially orgasm on command every time, made me roll my eyes a bit; it's just too unrealistic for me to suspend disbelief, no matter how hot the action being described.

In a similar vein, the second problem I have is the boy's staying power. Nineteen or not, six times in one day and "almost" shooting blanks is something you'd expect Superman to say. Unless that somewhat self-indulgently repeated detail about the protein powder he was drinking in those shakes included Popeye's cartoon spinach, it doesn't seem likely Justin could keep going back to the well that quickly and often.

Lastly, the subplots about the inheritance, the research grant, rescuing Sara, the conveniently empty luxury apartment; all of them together practically puts this story in the Sci-fi and Fantasy category, with an emphasis on the fantasy. I know most porn stories have a strong element of wish fulfilment, but having every conflict and plot twist immediately resolved by our paragon of a male protagonist or resolved for him by coincidences that pop up like back-up singers in a music video, sort of trivializes some of the plot.

Although the previous paragraphs may not lead you believe it, I did basically enjoy the series, and thought it was a shame Nicolas never continued it.

Cie la Vie.

I've read quite a few stories so far on this site, in different categories, and yours catch my eyes, with the title. I like the way you mixed the erotic parts and the story line. Some writers here emphasize way too much on the erotics parts and for my taste of course... not enough on the story. It's like watching porn, but read it instead. Not a bad thing by itself, but you get bored reading always the same thing, over and over. but you, mix it up just good. Please, give us the pleasure of reading a chapter 4, with the hinting you left in chap 3, this will be again a very good one. You have a 5 from me !

...nearly 14 months since the last update? And over 6 years since this chapter came out. I hope you're not letting comments steer the story. The first three chapters were great, write what you want to write, not what some fans tell you you should write.

Sarah has to be part of the Future..

continue please..

and the

make me your bitch was a total turn off. so much for love, so much for cherish, and so much for respect.

why do writers think they have to go beyond love and respect to spice things up?

While I have thoroughly enjoyed every chapter of your story, I just had to point this out:

You wrote "To say that I was distracted during the class would be like saying Moby Dick was a fish",

Since Moby Dick was a whale, and whales are mammals, NOT fish, this would mean that he was not distracted at all!

This has been amazing story thus far. Please consider continuing the adventure. You cannot leave us hanging with Kristine says try the rhurbarb at least one more chapter (hopefully not the last) could easily sate our lust for more thank you

I hope you have plans to continue this story. To many authors on here get to a certain point & just leave stories unfinished.

VERY FRUSTRATING for us readers!!!!!

Thanks for writing this story and series. Hope to read more.

I can't tell you how I want more. What about the Police Officer, what about - well - everybody, tell more about Sarah. Christ, don't leave me hanging!

As an older man, I like to read stories about older men and younger women, but this series was perfect. Please, continue!!

Thank you for the three chapters you have written so far! I enjoyed them mightily. There is a lot of potential and I would love for it to continue.

You need to finish the story.

please finish this story! it is one of the really good ones that i hate that there seems to be no hope of seeing an ending. so come back please and finish what you started.

Will you continue?? I read it and so far it 's great.

I really enjoyed reading your story. You made me feel like I was enjoying the adventure and enjoyment with them. Hope to read more of their adventures soon. Thank you!

Please continue writing, Every chapter is beautifully written. i cannot wait to read more about Erin andnJason

Where is the next chapter?

In this chapter the story lost it's fluency and twists and become somewhat boring with repetitive sex that was copy of one another. A lot of things felt stopgap. First chapter I loved, Second I liked but this one was just fap material.

Please, I pray, that you find the time and muse to continue this series. It is one of my favorites. I have read and re-read it many many times over. I like others await the continue of the the telling of the story!

For the good of man kind. You have done so well and should keep it going

Ditto to the last comment, please continue. Five long years, please continue this series. Please.

please continue this series.

Status report? Please continue the story. This is one of my favorite story and series in this site. Please continue.

the fact that this story - the very best in it's cathegory and so many great possibilities left - was never continued is a indeed a pity and a shame.

What a well written story. The balance between their emotions, life, lust, love and passion is done with a great balance, not to much of any of these at one time. I hope you continue this part of Justin's education to life's treasure's.

I love the action, but more - the balance of the emotional lives of the characters with their physical and intellectual needs. The understanding that Justin could in later years regret not letting loose when young shows thinking beyond the immediate situation, which I value.

I loved Justin's solution to Sarah's Problem, as satisfying as it would have been to knock her dad's head off, the better strategy was as done - neat and complete, if risky.

Complex, real world fantasy. Wonderful!

I hope you continue this! I would enjoy the next installment!

more like wreck me lol! this is great. I truly hope you continue on this series, there is so much potential, and your writing is just tops. Thanks so much!

One of the best stories and best series. Hope to see more chapters soon. Keep up the good work.

Please continue this most heartwarming and totally erotic saga, others pale in

comparison!!!!!!!

I can't wait for the next 34 installments. Incredible.

Just found these and read them today, they're very well written and incredibly arousing! I hope there are more on the way soon!

this was a very good story i do hope there is more i like to find out the reactions of their families.

I just finished the 3rd chapter, and this is easily the best story I've read here. It's nearing Christmas '12, and you submitted this chapter in July '08. I guess you're taking a break.

I'll content myself by figuring you're a good enough author, that you decided to write professionally. I hope so.

What happened to the rest of this story? I remember there being more to it than the three chapters here now. At least I think I remember more; maybe I dreamed it, but I could have sworn there was more with the cop, that he bought a new car and gave his little sister the one they had built up and a few other details. Hell maybe it was a dream; awesome story if you got me dreaming a conclusion.

really can't believe how awesome this whole series was. great work. hope to see more.

Your work is mesmerizeing I believe it is 1 of the best I have read on Literotcia many many thanks for a great read

:-0

This is a very good “read” and quite possibly one of the better stories here. Not everything is sexually related, there are several sub-stories thrown in for good measure and the characters are all well placed. It would be nice to hear more about the daughters Kathryn and Michelle, and the cop, Debra. It seems just in the little bit we’ve heard about Debra there may be more to that side of the story.

Needless to say, keep up the good work; I look forward to reading additional works on the series.

The writing is excellent and the story, although somewhat beyond the scope of believability, is interesting for its insights into human thinking and behavior. I look forward to chapter 4.

I know there are alot of folks wanting more. I know I do great read!

great story telling, you made me know this group of people and enjoy hanging lut with them. please write more. T

One of my favorite stories in this site. Very erotic and well written. More please.

Beatiful writings. What will happen with the girlfriend that he rescude? Maybe in Ch 4 you could tell us more.D

Bravo to one of the best stories in this site. Great story. Hope to see if Chapter 4 will come out.

Don't get your hopes too high for another chapter, four years and nothing. Still, worth reading and one of the best stories in this site. 5 stars for this series, shame we won't be able to read more about Justin and Erin's adventures.

Super story. Well drawn characters and super hot. How about an encore? More chapters would be fantastic.

I think you have lost track of the characters in your story. He has turned out to be the kind of jerk she divorced 10 years earlier. I guess it makes for interesting macho kinds of actions for those who like it, but it's not true to the characters you started with in the first chapter. Continuity is the key to good writing. If you want steamy sex then perhaps that's what you get but if you want to continue to develop your characters in a realistic way you've got to keep notes on who they were and what they might bcomme. I'm disappointed. He's not a very likeable yourn man any more.

Well writen, overall - the whole series. I felt the pacing was pretty much spot on - not too quick, not too slow

Excellent writing, need a fourth installment with the hot cop and Erin. Wow all women should be like Erin, there would be less divorce.

Great story; super use of vivid terms without overdoing it; I like the way your mind works. It's been four years since you wrote your third installment. Isn't it time to add to the history of this couple? That said, if you never add another word to this work, thank you for one of the best erotic readings I've had, to date.

Best erotic story I have ever read! But, the story needs to continue. Hope more is forthcoming.

Hi having read My Education twice I agree its agreat story but needs to be finished

your leaving to much to the imagination not allways a good idea thanks.

I loved this story. Can you finish it with Justin and Erin getting married and living happily ever after? The sex scenes were hot and it was great to read that they fell in love, I didn't see a threesome coming at the end, that was a little twist. Great story all the way around :)

Time for another chapter of ever several on how they are getting along........ Fantastic needs a few more chapters..........

I think this is probably one of the best reads I've seen from this site. I did want you to continue the story........ possibly let Sarah into the scene. Let him love her like she deserves ........with Erin at the helm. And what about the judge....Erin's sister??? There are so many ways to go with this story. Thanks again....

One of the greats in this site. Too bad this series has not been updated. Stil, loved every part of it and would've been eager to see where Justin and Erin's relationship was headed. Bravo and great job on this series.

I loved the seies 'My Education' but please where are the following chapters. Brilliant more power to your keyboard .... or pen

This is my first ever comment regarding a story anywhere (and I've read and written a lot of stories!). So well done, the author needs to be paid...PUBLISH! my friend...PUBLISH!

I can't wait for the next chapter.

oh my fucking god.. u have no idea how glued i was to my laptop reading this marvelous piece of work...please do continue with 'Ch. 04'

We want more! Ah, so frustrating to see this series just unfinished because it seemed like the author had more in plan.

What a fun story. I just read it for the first time and really enjoyed it.

Love the Noble Prize comment. Too bad this story hasn't been updated in over three years. Was looking forward to Chapter 4, but things look bleak. Still, one of the best stories ever.

More please. Great story matter, equally great writing, so, more please.

Very well written. I could not find one error. I sure hope this story is continued as it deserves more time. I really think it's the best I've read here so far!

Nicholas should be awarded Noble Prize for this noble subtle erotic series.

It has been 3 years, anyone know what happened? Would love to see Chapter 4 and see Justin and Erin's relationship blossom. Such a great series, just sad that nothing new for the past 3 years.

This was another outstanding episode in what has been a great series. I've given a lot of stories five stars and that makes this story (and series) worth more.

I too would love further instalments

Did the author die or something, because it's been 3 years. I've been reading literotica stories for a few months and I have yet to see an author submit a new chapter after this long. I'm bummed out because Justin could have helped Sarah sexually. Officer Coles, maybe her daughters if Erin allows it and a few more of her milf friends wouldn't have hurt either. Here's another story I have to forget.

I just finished, up to this point, these stories. I enjoyed the "completeness"

of this series. The sex was great, the fullness of the people's lives was great,

I can only finish with… WOW

More please!

Chapter 4 please. This is such a great series that more has to be written.

I think I'm in agreement with what many have said, please continue this series. This is such a great series and to have it end like this sucks. Anyone know if the writer is still alive?

PLEASE!!!!! continue this story. I just read the whole thing and it definately needs a chapter 4. And I think sarah needs to be included

One of the best stories I've read online. Complete it, damn you!!

Is the author no longer in Literotica, because I can't wait for Chapter 4. Such a good story.

Please write Chapter 4

You should write a Chapter 4, about our hero's continuing education. Maybe he can get together with people his own age, as well as MILFs. What would be HOT is if he got together with Sarah, and provided her the healing she sooo needs. And living out the scene Sarah described to Erin's ex with Erin would be the Perfect Ending for the series.

Can we expect a chapter 4? Definitely one of my favorites. Keep writing!!