All Comments on 'My Education Ch. 03'

Thanks for the story. I cared a lot about the relationships, which made the sex all the hotter.

you had me going the whole time...please forget the negative comments...they're not even the least bit helpful...i loved it...i was very hot throughout...thank you for the images and the wonderful sex...i fell in love with her myself...and his wonderful friend was just delightful.

Wow, utterly fantastic story. Blown away by this, over and over. Definitely got a powerful reaction from me, and sent so many amazing mental pictures through my mind.

You, I must say, are an absolute artist when it comes to your writing abilities, and your story has captured my attention. No other story, thus far, has kept me as spellbound as yours have. I applaud, nay, give a full 'standing ovation' for this story! A work of art, truly.

Please continue writing, and if you're willing to further this story, I know many people will be very interested in reading it.

You have captured our attention, and we love you for it :)

You have our blessings!

G

If you had a decent editor, you might have avoided these gaping flaws in your story:

1) if the family is supposedly so strapped trying to put the kids through college, they would surely consider selling the windfall BMW's. The insurance cost alone would make keeping them prohibitive.

2) the rationalization about not telling someone the other grandkids that their grandmother is dead, supposedly for their own good, because they are away at school, is idiotic, and anyone with an ounce of sense would know that. Apparently you don't.

3) grandma left 60 thousand dollars each to the main character and all of his siblings, and not one of these ingrates can be bothered to attend her funeral? This main character and his family is despicable. Why does everyone give this story such praise?

Don't quit your day job.

Here are three reasons I ducked out on the first page:

1) the passage: "... like saying Moby Dick is a fish." Are you kidding? Here's a heads up for all simpletons...Moby Dick is a mammal.

2) The inconsequential rambling about how you and someone else got new beemers.

3) Then completely unrealistic situation where the main character's father is in the meeting where the research job is offered.

Jeez, I like reading erotica, but not when the author has no understanding of his audience, nor of real life. This is crap.

This is a wonderful series. I've read it a couple of times, and I enjoy it each time. Please continue with more chapters.

The way the author built up the meeting of Justin and Officer Coles had me expecting something that never happened. Any chance Justin and Officer Coles will get something going in Ch. 4?

Excellent nice and beautiful story. Some women is lucky because they become slower elder, then the average women do. Because I know some similar bautiful women. This story demands carry on!

Just wanted to say I really enjoyed the story! Too bad things like that don't happen in real life!! The teachers I had,when I was Justins' age,were all in their mid 50's. Altho one of them I had a crush on (think it was more of a father complex,tho). The story was a really good read. I'd like to read more of a story like this. How did her kids like Justin? Did they get along? How did his folks take it? Did they realize that something was going on? How about his friends. How did things work out with Sarah ? I'd like to say more, but it's time I went to bed. Thanks for a great read!!! Great Story line, and great enjoyment in reading story!! Thanks

One of my favorite series in this website. While I enjoy the relationship between Erin and Justin and believe that it should continue. The history between Justin and Sarah was beautiful, and I hope you do expand on it. It just seems that Justin has the ability to heal sarah, which hopefully he does. Both of them obviously has feelings for each other, I hope you continue in that relationship.

But I have to say, you make Erin a very desirable woman..justin is a lucky lad

Kudos to you

Have to say I like that Justin character, he actually needs to think about it...

I really liked this story so far.

It has a lot of promise and fun characters in it, not to mention hot sex.

Too bad really that it seems to be doomed to never get finished.

Another great series that will never see completion.

Damn you real life, damn you to hell.

Merry Xmas and Happy New Year to you - Nico. Just discovered your name on this absolute lovely story and have read the three (3)chapters you have written up to now, and must say it is a wonderful, very skillful one, indeed. The story just flows and waiting for the next chapters...great all way thru and you a a very talented writer...keep it up! A+++++

Great story, keeps me wanting for more. Keep those chapters coming. Can't wait for chapter 4. You are quite a gifted writer for sure. Congrats on your writing A-1!!!

One of the best stories I've read here. Pushed lots ofmy buttons too. Love how you keep along that narrow border between plausability and fantasy. Hope you've found your own goddess. R.

fun and decadent, why not have it all in a fantasy?

hope you finish the series, its been very hot so far

Whew!!! I need a shower after this series. EXCELLENT!!!

This took off slowly, and then soured, terrific stuff wish I had the ability & imagination to do this sort of thing. I hope you've got another chapter on the way, if not I'll hunt you down. Great story Nicholas, please do a follow up as I'm waiting to see where Sarah & everyone end up. Kind Regards

Moby Dick was a whale, which makes him a mammal rather than a fish.

After reading I strated to remember my youth. And all things are possible. I hope the author keep his fantasy's runnig on high and keep's puttig them on paper or out on the net. Fun to read.

i hope

An amazing tale! I can only hope that at least some of this story is based on your personal experience. How else could I express the depth of my feelings for sharing such an incredible literotic journey. Take a break if you need to, just please come back to us with more writings.

Like several other commenters, I found this story at Chapter 1 and read all the way through. This is terrific! I'm left wondering what's going to happen next, like any good reader of good writing should. And I like the characters, which is important too. So keep it going, don't abandon us. As for my 2 cents, skip the daughters and work on Erin and Sarah.

This is one of the best series ever, and we need more of it. More as he goes thru college and more as she brings more loves to him, and him and Sarah and the others. Dont stop.

Was any of this based on real life some of it seemed to real to be fiction, and I don't mean the sex parts did you have a friend like Sarah and did you make that sacrifice of body to get her father arrested???

ANYWAY WOW WOW WOW!

Our author seems to have abandoned his fans. It's been over six months since he acknowedged his fans and almost a year since Chapter Three came out. I love his work and I'll never give him a bad score, but going so long without a word to those of us who've been supporting him seems disrespectful.

I more than loved this story. It was perfect so far. I cant wait until the next one. There is gonna be a next one right?

Your story deserves to continue. I hope to see much more in the future.

The series was Wonderful. I agree, men are also turned on by smarts. I intended to read just a short story- instead I had to finsh all 3 Chapters. Like others who have commented- I would like more chapters. Please!!!!

i really liked this story. just the right amount of love and erotic scenes. they are all well balanced . can wait for chapter four!

I love your work but you should avoid offering dates, or even any kind of definitive timeframe when you update your fans on your progress. As of now you're "late" delivering 2 chapters. Personally, I know real life can cause all kinds of roadblocks to delivering the work you so generously share with us. As I said, avoid giving a timeframe and people are more likely to be patient. I look forward to your next installment, best of luck.

I have just finished reading chapter 3. What a lovely story. So lovely infact that I am having withdrawles as there is no more chapters to read. Please help........Thanks you so much for the story. I hope there is much much more to it. The very best to you.....BGS

wow that was fantastic had me hard through out the entire story i hope more is coming soon!!!!!!

I, as with many others I'm sure, am looking forward to seeing where Justin and Erin go next.

I love your work but maybe an update on chapter 4 wouldn't hurt.

I just discovered this story, and might I add, I LOVE IT! I really like your writing style. It just sucks you right in with a firm grip. I can't wait to read the next chapter. I hope it'll be out soon. I look forward to your future work.

... there is one thing I'd like to see improved. Proofreading and editing. The story is great, and I love your writing style. But all 3 chapters suffer from grammer issues. Words missing, tenses wrong, etc. These things break the flow of the story for me, as I have to go back and figure out if I misread something, or if the text is wrong. I know it's a relatively small thing, but it deserves your attention.

Thanks, and keep up the good work.

Please don't make us wait too long for more chapters. Wow, this could go on for a number of chapters. Again, please hurry

PLEASE!

I love this story, i cant wait till the next installment comes out

WOW!!! THAT WAS THE BEST ONE I'VE READ IN A WHILE! TIME TO GET DEBRA AND SARAH IN IT ALSO HURRY UP WITH CH. 4 PLEASE

... ever since I saw the post that prompted it. I may be mistaken, but the Anonymous post on 7/16/08, as a whole, comes across an awful lot like telling the author what to write. Some parts were, in my opinion, good suggestions, other parts seem to be more self serving. I agree that Justin could, with some encouragement and, if handled the right way, participation from Erin, become Sarah's first real lover. I also doubt she would get involved with an older guy. The only experience she has with an older guy is when her father raped her, hardly the thing to make her look for another relationship with an older guy. Despite her problems and mistakes in trusting some not so great guys, Sarah comes across pretty well adjusted so the idea of her looking to get involved with an older guy so she can "find a daddy that loves her" doesn't seem plausible to me.

you've got company!! Holy shit! -- There are not near enough words to tell you how much I enjoyed this tale so far. Now get back to that keyboard and start writing GODDAMIT!! ;) -- Asolutely love the way you have made this a character driven saga. They make it very real and personal. I just wish Lit had a higher rating than 100%!!

Sarah is obviously wrestling with her own past, and her own desires, both physical, and emotional, toward Justin. You absolutely can't go any further in your story, without revealing it -- the tension I feel for her, so mirrors the sexual tension of Justin's interludes, that I'm about to explode! Erin understands "chemistry" and daughters -- she will task Justin with gently, slowly, healing Sarah's damaged sexuality. Shine the light on Sarah, as she watches, confronts her feelings, and struggles, exploring the ambiguity which Erin is engineering in their relationships, in an effort to protect her emotional life-line relationship with Justin, heal herself, and adapt to Erin and Justin's relationship. Justin will of course be Sarah's first intimate lover, because he is the closest to her, and because she feels indebted to him, but seek to move on, fiercely recognizing that he's "taken", that she's no match for Erin, and needing someone her own speed. But Erin will ensure the opening of her flower by Justin, is healthy, and beautiful, and once Sarah is on solid ground emotionally, will only then, introduce another of her students to Sarah. Sarah's romantic relationship will parallel and contrast with Erin and Justins, because Sarah will (rightly or wrongly) also choose an older man (call him Steven)...which creates additional ambiguity as Sarah and Justin's relationship parallel's Erin and Steven's.

You've got some wonderful personae developed, with exciting possibilities. Keep up the really good work!

This 3rd part was the sexiest and i hope you will the next chapters soon that we can reed what happens to Justin, Erin, Sarah and Erin's friends, just fantastic story, hope there will be many more chapters and don't take so long breaks.

THANKS

Your three chapters so far are why I read Literotica. I always hope to find special stories that make me care about the characters as if they were real people that I actually know. Your sex scenes are HOT, but your loving scenes are EVEN HOTTER. Your writing of the sex scenes is masterful, but I enjoy the caring and loving scenes even more. I hope for future chapters and will keep an eye out for them - even if it takes several months before the next chapter.

This chapter is the best. It contains some of the most erotic and loving experiences between two consenting people. Nick, you can't stop here. You opened so many doors for Justin and Erin to enter. Nick, I'm expecting you to take them through one of these open doors.

A masterful combination of both lust AND love that manages to quietly be both familiar and fresh. Well done.

Fantastic Nick! I LOVE Erin and Justin...Erin is every mans dream of being with a woman like her...PLease! You MUST continue the adventures of Justin and Erin...

this long awaited chapter was terrific. I've been looking forward to this for a long time now. That's not meant as a snarky comment to you, Nick, just the way it is. Hopefully your life will settle down so you have the time to enjoy writing like I think you do. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Keep up the great work