All Comments on 'My Evil Wife, My Loving Daughter'

I feel it was a great that was given to the family by the mother. think about it, it is the stuff dreams are made of.

I've read everything you have submitted. A very fine writer.

That was hands-down one of the very best stories I've read in years of visiting this site. The characters were believable, the dialogue sexy and well-timed. The story developed with perfect pacing and left me sopping wet! I really enjoy stories in which the whole family is involved, and this is a fantastic standard for others to measure against! Thank you very much. Would love to see new submissions from you!

Two cocks is one too many in any story. Up to that point, your story would get the best score from me, but i lost my interest as soon as the turn was taken.

Story was great. It was long but great.

My goodness - I cannot get enough of this!

loving this tale, very erotic and sexy, well paced and well written,,, one thing though has me curious,,what caused the changed family dynamic?

Please write more of this. Its so hot.

I understand the loving daughter part but where is the wife evil? She didn't make anyone do anything they didn't want to. Very hot!

Extremely hot. Great story! Thanks

I'm not usually a big fan of incest stories, but Amy's beautiful embarrassment, hesitance, and submission have grabbed me - wonderful, so far!

Amazing! Please do a story like this with twp sheltered albino daughters who don't have much of a social life due to how sensitive their skin and eyes are to the sun and their family starts making up for it in lewd ways and taking them to kinky places at night.

Not bad at all. Amy's transformation from a pristine and reluctant young lady to a full blown foul mouthed cum slut was way too abrupt. A better paced segue would help a lot.