by ProfessorPanty
this story is amazing. I'm speechless. Please keep going.
I really enjoyed this story, it was well thought out and well written. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter/s. Part one was also great as well!!
You've done it again hon, this story makes me wetter than Niagra Falls!
Kisses!
I am literally dripping. LOVED IT! Hurry up with the next chapter please!
The stories have been great and I look forward to more chapters. Maybe one (or more) per day for the thirty days?
Keep up the great work.
LOVE this story! Incredible! The in-depth detail is great, I'm glad you didn't simply write one paragraph before getting to the main event. Smartly written too. Love the emotion in it; as a sub female, it got me VERY aroused and I can't wait for chapter 3! Please keep writing :)
Why have I never found your stories! Your writing is incredible!
I hope I have some left for the next parts of your story. Great JOB!!
Hmmm, I'm a bit out of it but I really, really got turned on and enjoyed ch. 1. and beginning of ch. 2.
Then it started to feel repetive and same tone of the interaction between daddy and daughter. I wanted it to escalate and get more nasty. It felt like daddy just kept speaking to daughter in the same way. "Ok I'm gonna give your punishment and spank you now sweetheart" while she was getting wetter and wetter, the dialogue should have escalated to more dirty, filthy talk to his daughter. She wanted it nasty, he knew from spying on her story. By page 2 the words out of his mouth should have been more like "you like that don't you my slut daughter" That's it look at how sopping wet that fuck hole is now, showing me your pink insides you little bitch, you're daddy's little whore now" etc., etc. Just me, one mans opinion. I just felt it was going in this nastier direction and it didn't.