All Comments on 'My Fall and Rise Ch. 03'

OMG, this just gets better n better, what an absolutely wonderful chapter.

I never expected to find anything as polished, as well-written and just as damned good as this here - so good I'm reading it all at one go. Very impressive.

It's so rare to find a story as captivating as this, and so well written too. The brilliantly composed prose and wide range of vocabulary makes it a joy to read.

Can't get enough :)

Fascinating character dynamics. Fine writing. Thanks for sharing this story. *****

I'm really intrigued by this story, and it's so well written. I look forward to learning more about Alicia and Tanya. I love the way you are allowing us to know them in real time, without any backstory, knowing only as much as you know at any given time.

This is a challenge for me in writing;deciding how much history to give she any time. Harder when writing in third person POV, which I'm trying for the first time.

The sex with Tanya was well written, I was craving more detail, but it felt natural, because it was frenzied and rushed.

I'm anxious about Melissa's testimony in the next chapter, so apparently you are doing this all right. I'm invested in the characters.

You've done a magnificent job of crafting a strong narrative. You've lived an interesting life to say the least. I can't wait to read more.

I just used 15 on your last three chapters. And I don't want to read chapter 4 until I get some more. :)

I hope this is not a real life experience … just a fantastic tale or may hear say, may friends made a stint

But its a authentic description for me and your style is a perfect reading

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Great insights into the experiences of incarcerated women.