All Comments on 'My Fall and Rise Ch. 10'

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random_librarianrandom_librarianover 6 years ago
Beautiful

This whole story has been exquisitely written. Just marvelous.

ExescortExescortover 6 years ago
Fabby

Another fantastic chapter Miss Corleone. I’ve binged 10 chapters now, gonna leave the last three till tomorrow. Or maybe I won’t!

Wkd_MaceyWkd_Maceyabout 6 years ago
Addictive

'scuse the pun :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It's tough to follow all the Nicky portions of the story when Nicky is in jail and Melissa's already gotten out of jail. I don't see the point of going back to it over and over with new stories about Nicky and Melissa, when their relationship is over until he's out of jail.

32aa32aaabout 1 year ago

I'm convinced more and more with each chapter that this is a real-life story. A well-written real-life story.

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissy11 months ago

Foggy brain foggy thought’s foggy acting ….. truly hurting someone is breaking something, like a heart ….. as you had written before, at one time it will wear off , even drugs …. This decision, nickys, broke her … what a tale

Ten stars again ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨🍀

GoldustwingGoldustwingabout 1 month ago

The train is starting to wreck, great description of the coke induced paranoid behaviour.

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A bold bitch and a shy girl. An exile and an ex-con. A lover and a leaver. A wise fool and a stupid genius. A cocksucker. A student. A foodie, a boozie, a weedie. A rider of horses. A kisser of girls. A resister, an insister, a persister. Daughter of a goddess, mother of a gho...

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