All Comments on 'My Family'

What a lovely story cant wait for the next episode. Hope there will be one.

cant wait 4 the rest of the story

Great Start look forward to the rest

Nice, cannot wait for the next chapters

Please use speech marks.

Other than that, a good start

Nice, the way your story evolves suits my temperament. Not too fast, but enough to keep me interested. Thanks look forward to the next one.

Oh I do hope I don't miss the continuing episodes of this story.

Nice start. You should use more direct speech, as it gives your story a nicer flow. I looking forward to the next installment.

Love the story so far, get your mom to shave you so you all match !

Good job, got me turned on.. looking forward to more.

Love the story so far, please do continue.

I would suggest more dialogue, esp if you can use original Urdu dialogue with English translation. I find it particularly hot. Thanks.

What a great start,now all is set for some awesome action. Let your mind run wild because my mind is really excited about so many magnificent things that will happen.

Each enjoying each other,nothing off limits,hell I even want mom & daughter enjoying each other.

I like how it is heading. so far, sounds like Rouf is getting along with mom and somewhat dad. Can't wait to see how the family progresses.

When's the next "episode"??? Soon I hope!!

ecellent yaar, don't hang up now,

Keep going, I hope to hear rest of story ASAP

Great beginning, good imagery of your family.. please continue.... love to hear your sister's version also....

Great job with the beginning,KEEP IT UP! Really, keep it up...

Cute story. Hard to believe it is true.

where the fuck is the rest, dude ... im in middle of something...need it urgently,,great going,,,

It should of had a better ending. I was jacking off to your story.

where is the ending man the starting was good and you should have fucked your mothers ass in the kitchen that would have been great

I have gone naked with my family since they were teens. I fucked my two sons every day when they did not have girl friends. My husband always watched and loved to see me fucking my kids.

My wife and I are nudists and our two kids(son and daughter) are comfortable as nudists...

We can't wait to let them watch us having sex...

They're both pre-teens...

Is this a lie?

Where is ch.2 I'm waiting soo eagerly

There needs to be movement toward sexual activity.

what is the next chapter - they should definitely experience family sexual sharing it is a warm wonderful feeling

keep goin :)

but i'm disappointed to see this is the only chapter and it was written in 2011. not worth the read without more

Are you ever going to finish it? I like where it’s going

Are you planing to continue it? The begining is good makes the reader to want more. I hope next part will be uploaded soon

That’s it?

Next part?

I liked the story. It was going good then just ended. I understand a 2 part series but since part 2 isn't available yet part 1 should be able to stand alone. This story leaves everyone naked at the kitchen table then ends.

Love the story need more