All Comments on 'My Family Ch. 01'

Good story but half done . Logically ,this should have continued till his mom comes in picture .

I like this story...enough to give it Five**5**Stars...

I can read this a"as is"-it is well-written, if in a way that the author is obviois my Indian, as he identified himself in the opening paragraphs. Also, he writes as one, which is part of the draw to the story...it is entertaining to 'translate' all that is being said!

Ready for the next chapter...Mom is gonna play a bigger part in this, I hope!