by myDirtyHobby
I really liked the story and the sex. However, all the grammatical errors made the reading a bit distracting. It really would help if you got an editor or a proofreader. That being said, as I love a long story and hot sex, I still gave it five stars and a favorite point!
great. i do not read long stories. but yours was very interesting, thank you
My cock was up & down . I loved it , it made me horny as hell . I had one hell of an orgasm .