All Comments on 'My Family's Vacation in Ibiza'

by myDirtyHobby

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Sex4lf57Sex4lf57almost 3 years ago

I really liked the story and the sex. However, all the grammatical errors made the reading a bit distracting. It really would help if you got an editor or a proofreader. That being said, as I love a long story and hot sex, I still gave it five stars and a favorite point!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

great. i do not read long stories. but yours was very interesting, thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

My cock was up & down . I loved it , it made me horny as hell . I had one hell of an orgasm .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I would give it 100 stars but they only go to five

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I like to write stories where there is a somewhat realistic approach to situations my characters get themselves in too. They often start out teasing and then grow bolder over time.