All Comments on 'My Father in Law'

you really need to take more time to proofread. If you intend to expand on this story, with one or more chapters, then you should probably get an editor.

Oh sure it could be better with proofreading, but frankly these assholes who always bitch about that don't realize how tough it is to write an error free story.

Great concept and I can't wait to read how Mitch fucks her silly. Maybe even Mitch becomes a father and granddad at one time!

I know exactly how that feels, it's like having a roommate instead of a spouse. I don't fault them one bit.

I didn't c any thing wrong with this story i tought it was great i can't wait till part 2 comes a long waitting.

a shake of the head says no a nod says yes

Funny story. Loved how she felt his "harness" beneath her. Take a little extra time to proofread. No prize is given for finishing a story fast but your readers would appreciate and deserve a polished version. Just my two cents

I'm sorry, but this isn't incest.

In quite a few cultures and religions, yes this is incest. It is also incest by the legal definition of Incest by Affinity in a number of jurisdictions. As well as by incest by some definitions of the word, it is also considered taboo quite often.

The story idea was great, but the lack of interest in proofreading was a real downer.