All Comments on 'My Father's Second Wife Ch. 02'

I enjoyed the character development in this chapter, in addition to the sex. You maintained a good pace in the story. I look forward to the next chapter.

You really have great talent and this is an awesome debut story. Please keep up this excellent father daughter incest tale. Thanks, 5 star vote

I've never been a very fluid reader, and yet your story flows through my eyes and into my soul like I've never before witnessed. I also appreciate your ability to slip in and out of inner dialogue and spoken dialogue, or any of the story line with a smoothness I don't often encounter. :/) I actually am having trouble expressing the things I am feeling about your writing, having never really experienced this level of writing before.

Thanks for the read, and I look forward to, as patiently as I know how, the next installment.

Rig-a-Tony

I wanted to also add, I don't normally like f/d stories, as I have a daughter of my own, and I would never dream of any such activity. I am not one to judge others, but always honor myself and what feels right for me. Having said that, because of how well written this is, and the fact that no matter how demanding his expectations are, He always does it with respect and love, allowing it to ultimately be their decision.

Something I have said for prolly two decades now, and how I approach the sexual expansion of my lovers world is.... If you seduce the mind, the body is yours!! If you invest the time to earn your partners unconditional trust (always stopping with any fear, protest, pause), then use your words, confidence, playful bantor perhaps over the course of the entire day, through dinner, and into the night. You plant the subtle seeds and nurture them to full bloom until your lover is actually asking you to do said act, you can have anything you want with their blessings.

Since you present the Father in this light, I have been able to enjoy your f/d tale,

Brilliantly delicate kink!!

An excellent story with well developed characters. Hope there will be another chapter or 4. Looking forword to the continuation.

To everyone: Thank you for your interest, taking the time to comment on this series, and your words of encouragement. It is deeply appreciated.

Not sure what exactly is bothering me about this story. It's well written and flows smoothly, but I don't really know how to take the dad and the overt sex with the office sluts. I guess I want his daughter to feel a little special and right now she's just a hole for his dick like the office sluts. He talked about his wife as special and I got the impression that's what his daughter would be, but so far, nothing.

To Rigatony: I am overwhelmed by your praise. I agree wholeheartedly with your observations. I would also like to make the point that this is fiction, and we should be allowed to distinguish between that and reality. I have never had any inclination to kill someone, but I can easily see myself writing a story about plotting a murder.

To Lancelot55: I have a third chapter in the works and I had an inspiration last week for a fourth, so the series will continue. Please be patient. I am not, by any stretch of the imagination, a prolific writer.

To Anonymous: Thank you for your candid feedback. I agree, at this stage in the story, the only solid connection Charlotte and her father have is sex. Other aspects are a work-in-progress; you don't undo years of estrangement in a weekend. Without giving anything away, their relationship will develop over time. Check back, and let me know what you think at the end of chapter 4.

... to find that more chapters of this story are cuming. Hurray! I can hardly wait. This is fabulous, and clearly a five star effort every paragraph. This would make a great movie! // R1

Saw this one first on the new page, but decided to read the first one first. Usually don't try to get into series but I'm extactic i choose this one. The story is exquisite. Bravo.

But all I ask for is a HEA

Really enjoyed reading this story and was disappointed when it ended. I'm looking forward to further episides.

Extremely well written with a just the right amount of humour.

Very well written story. Keep going with this story was bummed because it ended hopefully you'll write another chapter

Hi Lee.

Any idea when you will be posting chapter 3? I really enjoyed the first two chapters & I can't wait for the next one.

I apologize to everyone for the delay. I've been tied up with (ironically) another writing project. I have chapters 3 & 4 pretty much finished, and hope to have them editing and uploaded soon. Expect 5 chapters in all.

Thanks for all of the great feedback and suggestions.

Nice! I enjoyed the first chapter better because it flowed better to me. I can't wait for more.

Hey Lee,

Could you please post chapter 3. I`ve been dying to read what happens next.

waiting & hoping & praying that there is still more to come

Really enjoy you story. I hope you can still finish the series

But different in a good way. More like unique.

I find myself really engrossed in the sex acts,,they are described fully and the story line flows very well,,,i am rubbing my cock with my left hand while scrolling with my right,,,satisfying way to read a debached incest tale such as this is,,,love it!!

I hope you submit your writing to editors it's both funny enthralling and a great read aside foe the few errors keep writing

I was hoping some kind of deep connection between father and daughter but it seems she's just like the rest of them only good for a fuck

So good. More please

you're a good sotry teller and writer for sure but for me personally i don't like how distant the father is with his daughter, makes me a bit uncomfortable but this could be casue im into the kink apect of daddy daughter with it being how a father loves his daughter so much and he just doesn't really show it, like, at all in this story. He treats her like she's just another women to fuck a lot of the times when they are together and seemed to even be more affectionate to Beth than her and it just doesn't sit right for me. Again this is my opinion and am in no way trying to offend you or anything you are a great writer and keep up the good work(: