All Comments on 'My Father's Wife'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Excellent story

Many young women have arranged marriage to much older man. Most want to be faithful but have desire not being satisfied by husband. It is unusual but not unique that son fills the need.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Aditor please

Good story in general terms. It is difficult for native English speakers to read non-English translations. The verbal structure just does not completely translate! I would be a much better read if this story had been converted to modern American or British (Kings) English.

Damn good subject and lines.

ratimomratimomover 4 years ago

Very hot story. Rated 5*.

GrandEagle53GrandEagle53over 2 years ago

Lost me when the son became demeaning and manipulative.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Loved this story but I read another of your stories and it's almost the same thing 5 stars

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