by tyler100
you are very, very, very talented
you got me all hot n' bothered and then you didn't finish the story!
dam... please continue!
:-D
very well written so far,your sister is a good fag hag writer-now stick a cock somewhere PLEASE!!!
Definately a teaser, but i love the story, and build up can be a good thing. i say go at your own pace, it's a great story so far, keep it up!