by tyler100
May get better when the author is older - for now, the characters are too immature to work well.
I agree with the other commentor, they are immature. Jake is especially a whiny, needy, clingy, little bitch. Sam breathes wrong and he has a fucking meltdown. Sam needs to fuck his brain's out and kick him to the curb. So immature...so needy...such a drama queen!