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All Comments on 'My Favourite Recruit. Unabridged'

by alexcarr

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
needs work

great story concept. very hot, but difficult to read because of all the spelling/grammar issues. this distracts from the full enjoyment of the story. might be worth getting an editor to help you.

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