by Kasumi_Lee
A very different story for sure. I didn't think it would go in this direction at all. You have the start of a movie here. Keep working on it and lets see where it takes us as we ride the winds of love and hate in this story.
This is very hot, as a fantasy. The ultimate loss of control and submission to carnal lust. More to follow, I hope!
Very hot. Needs a part 2 where he DOES return and fathers a second child. Maybe he fathers ALL of her children while her clueless husband stays in the dark
Exemplary; read mine now! "This....really....happened." In the Ballet section here, fyi. Thoughts?
Really, really stupid, self-centered, and risky for her not reporting the rape and not getting tested... what if she had gotten a disease and transferred it to her husband... what if the next person he rapes he beats up of even kills... this in no fantasy... it is a nightmare.
Sweet. I love my wife being manipulated and being taken advantage of and this story is perfect. She’s not hurt, he gets what he wants and I get to see how sexy and hot my wife is.
Never imagined I would find myself engaged about a non con story that is secretly a romance!! Loved it.
same crap women like to be raped wonder why so maney males are in jail for it .
Pretty good story, interesting set up. Just some constructive feedback: there's a bit of grammar disconnect between the verb tenses in the story. Consider sticking to either present or past tense.