All Comments on 'My First'

I liked the story found it sweet and sexy. Keep writing. Maybe continue with this one or start another.

Nice story, keep writing you’re good at it.

Very well written. You have the talent.

Good writing, good storytelling. Keep it up.

I loved this story. I'd love to read the sequel where she teaches him how to really please a woman with his mouth and tongue; give him a good course in female physiology and erogenous zones.

Good job and thanks for sharing.

A lovely story which is well written. It’s perfect as a stand-alone, but you should definitely continue writing, whether a sequel to this one or something different.

Really well written. I would love to see another chapter in this story.

Very good! Every young guys dream to have an experienced woman show him the ropes!

It was a lovely, innocents lost moment in a young man's life.

Good writing my friend.

It stands alone perfectly.