All Comments on 'My First Business Conference'

Another hot story that scorched my screen and make me pause to check my hardware for any 3rd degree burns. Joan is one of lits finest writers.

At age 41 maybe I still; have a few things to look forward to!! Very hot!

Matt

Ya done it again doll! As the kinds shy mature guy myself, I could only have wished this for me on those conferences I went to but alas, no more. Looking forward to your others.

As i said in the title this only really needs one word to describe this story..Brilliant. So well written and well described and mixing tender shy moments with pure wanton lust..fantastic. I can't wait to read your other submissions. Thank you :)

I'm reading all your stories. You are a wonderful writer. You are hot, you are talented, you are hot, you are entertaining, you are hot, and you are very hot.

I really enjoyed your story. This was the first one of yours that I've read, but not the last! The story was interesting, the sex hot, and I enjoyed the humor you added from time to time. Way to go!!! Gualterio

The first time I have read one of your stories. I am an older man and really enjoyed the story and the sex.

Beautifully written, great realism, and incredibly hot. Great story!

erotic and beautifully written. Thank you

Wish I'd met one! Before I was married, of course!

Fun story! Enjoyed it!

Hmmm, this could have easlily gone into the Loving Wife catagory. Wife travels, wife cheats, wife gets pregnant by another man possibly. Sure hope that kid looks enough like her husband that he never questions it. Very hot story, thank you for it.

but for me cheating is not erotic

Would be a hot story if it wasn't really about betraying the trust of her husband and fathering someone else's child. C'mon folks, really?? I wish I could give it -3 stars. Literotica should have a "Low-Life" section for crap like this.

So, Anonymous, she's a low-life whore, but not a word about HIS behavior. He's married with children, so the impact on the family of HIS cheating would be tremendous, but SHE'S the only one you call out?? By keeping silent she saves both relationships, which seems to be a better outcome than telling him. If you don't like stories about cheating, why did you keep reading beyond the point of the tale you found they were each married?

I loved the build up and the details of the sex scenes

Nice buildup.

But the actual sex left something to be desired. There was little foreplay -- that was described. Her braless breasts didn't get much attention -- besides him squeezing them. There wasn't much in the way of her playing with his cock; and nothing with his balls. Needed long, slow handjob teasing, with her being sure he didn't cum.

It was on its way to five stars, but didn't make it.

Four stars.

Pure crap.