All Comments on 'My First Date'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
WTF

does the title say? Within the title and first paragraph there were too many errors to bother reading further

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Jeez

10 1/2 inches? Really. What bullshit. Not a great story. Interesting but not great. WAY too much superfluous info. (Altho I have a weakness for redheads) Try again with an experienced editor? Shows promise.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Please

Please write more

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I thought I had logged on to XNXX and stopped when I read 10.5 inch dick!

You don't have what it takes for this site yet, but you do have promise.

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