All Comments on 'My First Day As a Pro Domme'

I hope you'll be writing more. And you have a very pleasant, almost relaxed, writing style.

I had a friend who pro-dommed in New York, and her description of working in a dungeon was very much like yours. And I loved your description of the cock & ball torture -- that was hot.

I'm hoping you'll be writing more.

This reminds me so much of my sessioning days! Thanks!

I just submitted my second story, and I'm starting in a third. Thanks to everyone for their kind words.

I enjoyed your pacing uring this story. Deliberate and still hot. And you didn't rush the progression of your character. Thanks for the great story.

Very straight forward; almost clinical. Not very erotic, but interesting for a start. The CBT was almost non-existent, but the nipple torture to exact Peter's cumming was almost intuitive, especially for a beginner

I'm sorry you didn't find the story very erotic, but I'm glad you shared your comment. Looking back on this story, I can see that I was trying to give a behind-the-scenes take on working in a dungeon. As a first-timer, you're only with a client for fifteen or twenty minutes, so there's not a ton of action.

I hope you'll check out my other stories, which have much more action and are much more graphic.

Thanks again for reading, and sharing your thoughts!

I re-read your story after a few years, and it still did not cool off! It is also a neatly crafted narrative, BTW. Please write more!