by lovelyladyfaire
i don't think you took enough time off. this story was so bland to me...not enough heat.
Hot enough for me. I don't think I could have taken more heat. But then, I'm an old man.
Girl, you have nailed it again! While this story is still hot and makes me horny for an old man, you can feel the love and emotion just pouring out of it! Keep up the good work. I'll be waiting......
Really enjoyable reading would love to hear how they went on in future.
Have fantasied before about old chubby/fat men (usually they are perverted and nasty) but this makes me want to go out on the prowl and find one. Perhaps in a dirty porn shop/theatre ;)
You did not disappoint in this sequel. You certainly got my furnace roaring. 😜
I didn't even realized chapter 1 was gone oof.
I mustve started reading from the start of chapter 2?
But holy shit I loved this story, it wasn't just raw never ending sex. There was actual love in it between the two.
I don't know if you'll ever make more, but I hope you do! This was the hottest story I ever read.
The first chapter is stunningly erotic - it is truly LLF’s greatest work. It’s so frustrating that it’s been removed. Please please put it back; there’s nothing inappropriate about it!
It felt like a love story from beginning to end. Very moving and yet lusty.Thanks for this Artwork.