All Comments on 'My First Erotic Summer'

Thank you for such a well written story.

The detailed descriptions were excellent.

It is nice to read a story that is all positive and doesn't have any negative consecquences.

Your paragraphs contain excellent detail and are very realistic.

Please submit more of this type of story.

A continuing summer adventure would be an excellent starting point.

Again, congratulations on a well written story.

this was the best story i have read in a long time please write more like it

Shared loving techniques always is a turn on for me, and this situation just seems right for the sharing. Though if Mark doesn't get with the program, Scott may wind up with both girls on his hands.

Technically, the only flaw I saw was one misspelled word, waste instead of waist, which would pass a spellchecker. That only points out the need for repeated proof reading, a good habit for a writer to get into.