by aislesofwhite
You have some eroticism here, but you definitely need an editor. The typos and grammar were so bad I stopped reading. Here are some examples:
"Being best friends there of coarse were times..."
"I could feel my head spin as me and Ashley danced together."
"Taking my hand she lead me to the bathroom..."
"Grinding our wet pussys together..."
"She wraps her arms around me s we drift into a after orgasm doze."