All Comments on 'My First MILF'

by younghunganddumb

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sparktjsparktjover 4 years ago

Not bad, would have liked a bit more detail about your partner, but otherwise a reasonable story. Look forward to reading more. Nice to see someone of your young age writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
2*

I get tired of these boilerplate stories wherein they attempt to portray a 36 year old woman as mature. 60 belongs in the mature category, 36 in the erotic coupling at best.

2Sisters2Love2Sisters2Loveover 4 years ago
Own Grandfather

You aren't related to yourself, are you?

HerbieGoesBananasHerbieGoesBananasover 4 years ago
Great start

Great first story, good pace and believable. It would have been great to learn a bit more about Jess, what she was wearing, what you noticed about her. A solid 4/5

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Need to get an editor

The story was very simple but it needs input from an experienced editor to create a more interesting narrative

chytownchytownover 4 years ago
I Have Read This Before**

By at least 20 or more different authors only different they were packing 10 or 12 inch cocks (LOL). Slow down and proof read your stories or as mentioned earlier get an editor!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Turned off

Don’t know anyone being modest with 8 inches “but” thick. Modest is average or less. Lost me there...and agree some editing would help the basic premise. I don’t necessarily agree with those who suggest this should be in the mature section...age here is mature for his age

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