All Comments on 'My First Punishment'

This was an excellent tale of a boyfriend's revenge on his cheating girlfriend. Apparently, it was a sequel too. I haven't read the original, but if the sequel is anything to go by, I'm impressed. True, there were some punctuation and grammatical errors, but I found it stimulating and exciting all the way through. I particularly enjoyed the spanking and cock-sucking parts. I also liked that she was contrite and submissive. I give this one another 5 (not a bad day here) and look forward to reading more of this writer's work.

It was short, but still somehow didn't feel rushed. I particularly liked the dialogue; very hot! Thank you for sharing.

James isn't such a good guy after all. He reacts this way after fucking Mandy. Never mind with or without consent. But Chloe's not so lily white either.